THE LONGEST GROWING POEM

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Permalink Reply by Dawn on November 2, 2008 at 1:17am

Frederick.....
Hey I saw a Gate I chrashed Thru
then I saw Pandora nd she said boo
Oh I said where is the loo,
she said boooo
Oh im hard of hearing as well as shy sorry,

Dawn....
How are You,
I wanted to say ... "Booo too"
its good to C U here

Im no good at rhyme, but havin a go
Dont know where its leadning, but could be misleading!

Eve,,,,
Words will come, and they will grow,
Into this poem, or my heart will start bleedin'

Dawn...
I just hope this poem has "meaning",

Now, Eve is not sleeping,
Frederick is just leaping,
And,
Rick is a dreaming of ...

Rick...
Frederick,
It's good that your here
with your rhyme
to entertain the Ladies
while I fight crime
because it's easy to see,
between you and me
the Ladies rhymes
are but crimes

Dawn...
Rick
You are cheeky
and Fred is leeky
Us girls are the best
since sliced bread
We aim to please
and discourage crime
its yoo boys that
tease and give us girls
emmense unnease,

Girls dont do crime
and dont do no good
we aim to do better
and spread our pleasure
and knowing whats good for the better

Chief...
Never to fear
Wagstaff is here
Full of good cheer
M&M Peanuts - n' root beer.

Dawn and Eve
Have come to believe
They're Shelley and Keats n'
Make poetry that's hard to beat.

But squirrels ain't critics
N' really don't know
One from the other
Of them so n' so's

Just hand me some peanuts
N' a bottle of beer (root)
Cause squirrels ain't poets
And don't give a hoot.

Rick...
I have a pet hawk,
his name is coot
squirrels for breakfast
give him a hoot
so Wagstaff beware
it might not seem fair
but he's looking to eat
and considers squirrels a treat

Chief...
Wagstaff ain't worried
He's safe as can be
Here on the Internet n'
Not up a tree.

Hawks are rats
N' stealer's of hats
Pieces of ribbon
N' old ladies cats

Coot ya can't catch me
I'm safe with the Chief
Pass me the peanuts
N' give me no grief.

EVE...
well, I have a Min Pin,
who likes to eat meat
off the bones of mice,
and squirrels, and will win
any fight you give him
for he likes the challenge..

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Permalink Reply by Dawn on November 2, 2008 at 1:19am

Frederick.....
Hey I saw a Gate I chrashed Thru
then I saw Pandora nd she said boo
Oh I said where is the loo,
she said boooo
Oh im hard of hearing as well as shy sorry,

Dawn....
How are You,
I wanted to say ... "Booo too"
its good to C U here

Im no good at rhyme, but havin a go
Dont know where its leadning, but could be misleading!

Eve,,,,
Words will come, and they will grow,
Into this poem, or my heart will start bleedin'

Dawn...
I just hope this poem has "meaning",

Now, Eve is not sleeping,
Frederick is just leaping,
And,
Rick is a dreaming of ...

Rick...
Frederick,
It's good that your here
with your rhyme
to entertain the Ladies
while I fight crime
because it's easy to see,
between you and me
the Ladies rhymes
are but crimes

Dawn...
Rick
You are cheeky
and Fred is leeky
Us girls are the best
since sliced bread
We aim to please
and discourage crime
its yoo boys that
tease and give us girls
emmense unnease,

Girls dont do crime
and dont do no good
we aim to do better
and spread our pleasure
and knowing whats good for the better

Chief...
Never to fear
Wagstaff is here
Full of good cheer
M&M Peanuts - n' root beer.

Dawn and Eve
Have come to believe
They're Shelley and Keats n'
Make poetry that's hard to beat.

But squirrels ain't critics
N' really don't know
One from the other
Of them so n' so's

Just hand me some peanuts
N' a bottle of beer (root)
Cause squirrels ain't poets
And don't give a hoot.

Rick...
I have a pet hawk,
his name is coot
squirrels for breakfast
give him a hoot
so Wagstaff beware
it might not seem fair
but he's looking to eat
and considers squirrels a treat

Chief...
Wagstaff ain't worried
He's safe as can be
Here on the Internet n'
Not up a tree.

Hawks are rats
N' stealer's of hats
Pieces of ribbon
N' old ladies cats

Coot ya can't catch me
I'm safe with the Chief
Pass me the peanuts
N' give me no grief.

EVE...
well, I have a Min Pin,
who likes to eat meat
off the bones of mice,
and squirrels, and will win
any fight you give him
for he likes the challenge..

Rick...
[Note to Wagstaff]

I've never seen a hawk so depressed
he hung his head low and then he just left

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Permalink Reply by Rick on November 2, 2008 at 1:27am

It's not about you going to jail
it's not about we're having a sale
The boat is not leaking
you don't have to bail
but do me a favor
and check your e-mail

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Permalink Reply by Dawn on November 2, 2008 at 1:29am

Frederick.....
Hey I saw a Gate I chrashed Thru
then I saw Pandora nd she said boo
Oh I said where is the loo,
she said boooo
Oh im hard of hearing as well as shy sorry,

Dawn....
How are You,
I wanted to say ... "Booo too"
its good to C U here

Im no good at rhyme, but havin a go
Dont know where its leadning, but could be misleading!

Eve,,,,
Words will come, and they will grow,
Into this poem, or my heart will start bleedin'

Dawn...
I just hope this poem has "meaning",

Now, Eve is not sleeping,
Frederick is just leaping,
And,
Rick is a dreaming of ...

Rick...
Frederick,
It's good that your here
with your rhyme
to entertain the Ladies
while I fight crime
because it's easy to see,
between you and me
the Ladies rhymes
are but crimes

Dawn...
Rick
You are cheeky
and Fred is leeky
Us girls are the best
since sliced bread
We aim to please
and discourage crime
its yoo boys that
tease and give us girls
emmense unnease,

Girls dont do crime
and dont do no good
we aim to do better
and spread our pleasure
and knowing whats good for the better

Chief...
Never to fear
Wagstaff is here
Full of good cheer
M&M Peanuts - n' root beer.

Dawn and Eve
Have come to believe
They're Shelley and Keats n'
Make poetry that's hard to beat.

But squirrels ain't critics
N' really don't know
One from the other
Of them so n' so's

Just hand me some peanuts
N' a bottle of beer (root)
Cause squirrels ain't poets
And don't give a hoot.

Rick...
I have a pet hawk,
his name is coot
squirrels for breakfast
give him a hoot
so Wagstaff beware
it might not seem fair
but he's looking to eat
and considers squirrels a treat

Chief...
Wagstaff ain't worried
He's safe as can be
Here on the Internet n'
Not up a tree.

Hawks are rats
N' stealer's of hats
Pieces of ribbon
N' old ladies cats

Coot ya can't catch me
I'm safe with the Chief
Pass me the peanuts
N' give me no grief.

EVE...
well, I have a Min Pin,
who likes to eat meat
off the bones of mice,
and squirrels, and will win
any fight you give him
for he likes the challenge..

Rick...
[Note to Wagstaff]

I've never seen a hawk so depressed
he hung his head low and then he just left

Rick...
It's not about you going to jail
it's not about we're having a sale
The boat is not leaking
you don't have to bail
but do me a favor
and check your e-mail

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Permalink Reply by Andy on November 2, 2008 at 1:40am

Andy

I laughed when reading this long rhyme
penned by friends never costing a dime
at the weekend party committing no crime
Just them all having a jolly good time
bless them for they do no harm
kissing the blarney, turning on the charm".



Dawn said:

Frederick.....
Hey I saw a Gate I chrashed Thru
then I saw Pandora nd she said boo
Oh I said where is the loo,
she said boooo
Oh im hard of hearing as well as shy sorry,

Dawn....
How are You,
I wanted to say ... "Booo too"
its good to C U here

Im no good at rhyme, but havin a go
Dont know where its leadning, but could be misleading!

Eve,,,,
Words will come, and they will grow,
Into this poem, or my heart will start bleedin'

Dawn...
I just hope this poem has "meaning",

Now, Eve is not sleeping,
Frederick is just leaping,
And,
Rick is a dreaming of ...

Rick...
Frederick,
It's good that your here
with your rhyme
to entertain the Ladies
while I fight crime
because it's easy to see,
between you and me
the Ladies rhymes
are but crimes

Dawn...
Rick
You are cheeky
and Fred is leeky
Us girls are the best
since sliced bread
We aim to please
and discourage crime
its yoo boys that
tease and give us girls
emmense unnease,

Girls dont do crime
and dont do no good
we aim to do better
and spread our pleasure
and knowing whats good for the better

Chief...
Never to fear
Wagstaff is here
Full of good cheer
M&M Peanuts - n' root beer.

Dawn and Eve
Have come to believe
They're Shelley and Keats n'
Make poetry that's hard to beat.

But squirrels ain't critics
N' really don't know
One from the other
Of them so n' so's

Just hand me some peanuts
N' a bottle of beer (root)
Cause squirrels ain't poets
And don't give a hoot.

Rick...
I have a pet hawk,
his name is coot
squirrels for breakfast
give him a hoot
so Wagstaff beware
it might not seem fair
but he's looking to eat
and considers squirrels a treat

Chief...
Wagstaff ain't worried
He's safe as can be
Here on the Internet n'
Not up a tree.

Hawks are rats
N' stealer's of hats
Pieces of ribbon
N' old ladies cats

Coot ya can't catch me
I'm safe with the Chief
Pass me the peanuts
N' give me no grief.

EVE...
well, I have a Min Pin,
who likes to eat meat
off the bones of mice,
and squirrels, and will win
any fight you give him
for he likes the challenge..

Rick...
[Note to Wagstaff]

I've never seen a hawk so depressed
he hung his head low and then he just left

Rick...
It's not about you going to jail
it's not about we're having a sale
The boat is not leaking
you don't have to bail
but do me a favor
and check your e-mail

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Permalink Reply by Dawn on November 2, 2008 at 1:43am

Frederick.....
Hey I saw a Gate I chrashed Thru
then I saw Pandora nd she said boo
Oh I said where is the loo,
she said boooo
Oh im hard of hearing as well as shy sorry,

Dawn....
How are You,
I wanted to say ... "Booo too"
its good to C U here

Im no good at rhyme, but havin a go
Dont know where its leadning, but could be misleading!

Eve,,,,
Words will come, and they will grow,
Into this poem, or my heart will start bleedin'

Dawn...
I just hope this poem has "meaning",

Now, Eve is not sleeping,
Frederick is just leaping,
And,
Rick is a dreaming of ...

Rick...
Frederick,
It's good that your here
with your rhyme
to entertain the Ladies
while I fight crime
because it's easy to see,
between you and me
the Ladies rhymes
are but crimes

Dawn...
Rick
You are cheeky
and Fred is leeky
Us girls are the best
since sliced bread
We aim to please
and discourage crime
its yoo boys that
tease and give us girls
emmense unnease,

Girls dont do crime
and dont do no good
we aim to do better
and spread our pleasure
and knowing whats good for the better

Chief...
Never to fear
Wagstaff is here
Full of good cheer
M&M Peanuts - n' root beer.

Dawn and Eve
Have come to believe
They're Shelley and Keats n'
Make poetry that's hard to beat.

But squirrels ain't critics
N' really don't know
One from the other
Of them so n' so's

Just hand me some peanuts
N' a bottle of beer (root)
Cause squirrels ain't poets
And don't give a hoot.

Rick...
I have a pet hawk,
his name is coot
squirrels for breakfast
give him a hoot
so Wagstaff beware
it might not seem fair
but he's looking to eat
and considers squirrels a treat

Chief...
Wagstaff ain't worried
He's safe as can be
Here on the Internet n'
Not up a tree.

Hawks are rats
N' stealer's of hats
Pieces of ribbon
N' old ladies cats

Coot ya can't catch me
I'm safe with the Chief
Pass me the peanuts
N' give me no grief.

EVE...
well, I have a Min Pin,
who likes to eat meat
off the bones of mice,
and squirrels, and will win
any fight you give him
for he likes the challenge..

Rick...
[Note to Wagstaff]

I've never seen a hawk so depressed
he hung his head low and then he just left

Rick...
It's not about you going to jail
it's not about we're having a sale
The boat is not leaking
you don't have to bail
but do me a favor
and check your e-mail

Eve...

Well, I have a Min Pin,
who likes to eat meat
off the bones of mice,
and squirrels, and will win
any fight you give him
for he likes the challenge

Andy...
I laughed when reading this long rhyme
penned by friends never costing a dime
at the weekend party committing no crime
Just them all having a jolly good time
bless them for they do no harm
kissing the blarney, turning on the charm".

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Permalink Reply by Dawn on November 2, 2008 at 2:15am

Frederick.....
Hey I saw a Gate I chrashed Thru
then I saw Pandora nd she said boo
Oh I said where is the loo,
she said boooo
Oh im hard of hearing as well as shy sorry,

Dawn....
How are You,
I wanted to say ... "Booo too"
its good to C U here

Im no good at rhyme, but havin a go
Dont know where its leadning, but could be misleading!

Eve,,,,
Words will come, and they will grow,
Into this poem, or my heart will start bleedin'

Dawn...
I just hope this poem has "meaning",

Now, Eve is not sleeping,
Frederick is just leaping,
And,
Rick is a dreaming of ...

Rick...
Frederick,
It's good that your here
with your rhyme
to entertain the Ladies
while I fight crime
because it's easy to see,
between you and me
the Ladies rhymes
are but crimes

Dawn...
Rick
You are cheeky
and Fred is leeky
Us girls are the best
since sliced bread
We aim to please
and discourage crime
its yoo boys that
tease and give us girls
emmense unnease,

Girls dont do crime
and dont do no good
we aim to do better
and spread our pleasure
and knowing whats good for the better

Chief...
Never to fear
Wagstaff is here
Full of good cheer
M&M Peanuts - n' root beer.

Dawn and Eve
Have come to believe
They're Shelley and Keats n'
Make poetry that's hard to beat.

But squirrels ain't critics
N' really don't know
One from the other
Of them so n' so's

Just hand me some peanuts
N' a bottle of beer (root)
Cause squirrels ain't poets
And don't give a hoot.

Rick...
I have a pet hawk,
his name is coot
squirrels for breakfast
give him a hoot
so Wagstaff beware
it might not seem fair
but he's looking to eat
and considers squirrels a treat

Chief...
Wagstaff ain't worried
He's safe as can be
Here on the Internet n'
Not up a tree.

Hawks are rats
N' stealer's of hats
Pieces of ribbon
N' old ladies cats

Coot ya can't catch me
I'm safe with the Chief
Pass me the peanuts
N' give me no grief.

EVE...
well, I have a Min Pin,
who likes to eat meat
off the bones of mice,
and squirrels, and will win
any fight you give him
for he likes the challenge..

Rick...
[Note to Wagstaff]

I've never seen a hawk so depressed
he hung his head low and then he just left

Rick...
It's not about you going to jail
it's not about we're having a sale
The boat is not leaking
you don't have to bail
but do me a favor
and check your e-mail

Eve...

Well, I have a Min Pin,
who likes to eat meat
off the bones of mice,
and squirrels, and will win
any fight you give him
for he likes the challenge


Dawn...
I Aint no mincer
& I like to eat meat
Veggie's the Word
When U want to Get Heard

Andy...


I laughed when reading this long rhyme
penned by friends never costing a dime
at the weekend party committing no crime
Just them all having a jolly good time
bless them for they do no harm
kissing the blarney, turning on the charm".

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Permalink Reply by Dawn on November 2, 2008 at 2:23am

Frederick.....
Hey I saw a Gate I chrashed Thru
then I saw Pandora nd she said boo
Oh I said where is the loo,
she said boooo
Oh im hard of hearing as well as shy sorry,

Dawn....
How are You,
I wanted to say ... "Booo too"
its good to C U here

Im no good at rhyme, but havin a go
Dont know where its leadning, but could be misleading!

Eve,,,,
Words will come, and they will grow,
Into this poem, or my heart will start bleedin'

Dawn...
I just hope this poem has "meaning",

Now, Eve is not sleeping,
Frederick is just leaping,
And,
Rick is a dreaming of ...

Rick...
Frederick,
It's good that your here
with your rhyme
to entertain the Ladies
while I fight crime
because it's easy to see,
between you and me
the Ladies rhymes
are but crimes

Dawn...
Rick
You are cheeky
and Fred is leeky
Us girls are the best
since sliced bread
We aim to please
and discourage crime
its yoo boys that
tease and give us girls
emmense unnease,

Girls dont do crime
and dont do no good
we aim to do better
and spread our pleasure
and knowing whats good for the better

Chief...
Never to fear
Wagstaff is here
Full of good cheer
M&M Peanuts - n' root beer.

Dawn and Eve
Have come to believe
They're Shelley and Keats n'
Make poetry that's hard to beat.

But squirrels ain't critics
N' really don't know
One from the other
Of them so n' so's

Just hand me some peanuts
N' a bottle of beer (root)
Cause squirrels ain't poets
And don't give a hoot.

Rick...
I have a pet hawk,
his name is coot
squirrels for breakfast
give him a hoot
so Wagstaff beware
it might not seem fair
but he's looking to eat
and considers squirrels a treat

Chief...
Wagstaff ain't worried
He's safe as can be
Here on the Internet n'
Not up a tree.

Hawks are rats
N' stealer's of hats
Pieces of ribbon
N' old ladies cats

Coot ya can't catch me
I'm safe with the Chief
Pass me the peanuts
N' give me no grief.

EVE...
well, I have a Min Pin,
who likes to eat meat
off the bones of mice,
and squirrels, and will win
any fight you give him
for he likes the challenge..

Rick...
[Note to Wagstaff]
I've never seen a hawk so depressed
he hung his head low and then he just left

Rick...
It's not about you going to jail
it's not about we're having a sale
The boat is not leaking
you don't have to bail
but do me a favor
and check your e-mail

Eve...
Well, I have a Min Pin,
who likes to eat meat
off the bones of mice,
and squirrels, and will win
any fight you give him
for he likes the challenge


Dawn...
I Aint no mincer
& I like to eat meat
Veggie's the Word
When U want to Get Heard

Andy...
I laughed when reading this long rhyme
penned by friends never costing a dime
at the weekend party committing no crime
Just them all having a jolly good time
bless them for they do no harm
kissing the blarney, turning on the charm".

Dawn...
Ink mixes with water
The dime is an art
No value required
but just doing art
The party weekend is free and so real
our friendship is marked upon the charm it "sparks"

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Permalink Reply by Gibbo on November 2, 2008 at 2:36am

Here i am, in da room
reading this rhyme
took me some time

Thinking of the next line
will take me some time
how do i know
if it will rhyme.

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Permalink Reply by Eve M. on November 2, 2008 at 2:46am

Dawn said:

Frederick.....
Hey I saw a Gate I chrashed Thru
then I saw Pandora nd she said boo
Oh I said where is the loo,
she said boooo
Oh im hard of hearing as well as shy sorry,

Dawn....
How are You,
I wanted to say ... "Booo too"
its good to C U here

Im no good at rhyme, but havin a go
Dont know where its leadning, but could be misleading!

Eve,,,,
Words will come, and they will grow,
Into this poem, or my heart will start bleedin'

Dawn...
I just hope this poem has "meaning",

Now, Eve is not sleeping,
Frederick is just leaping,
And,
Rick is a dreaming of ...

Rick...
Frederick,
It's good that your here
with your rhyme
to entertain the Ladies
while I fight crime
because it's easy to see,
between you and me
the Ladies rhymes
are but crimes

Dawn...
Rick
You are cheeky
and Fred is leeky
Us girls are the best
since sliced bread
We aim to please
and discourage crime
its yoo boys that
tease and give us girls
emmense unnease,

Girls dont do crime
and dont do no good
we aim to do better
and spread our pleasure
and knowing whats good for the better

Chief...
Never to fear
Wagstaff is here
Full of good cheer
M&M Peanuts - n' root beer.

Dawn and Eve
Have come to believe
They're Shelley and Keats n'
Make poetry that's hard to beat.

But squirrels ain't critics
N' really don't know
One from the other
Of them so n' so's

Just hand me some peanuts
N' a bottle of beer (root)
Cause squirrels ain't poets
And don't give a hoot.

Rick...
I have a pet hawk,
his name is coot
squirrels for breakfast
give him a hoot
so Wagstaff beware
it might not seem fair
but he's looking to eat
and considers squirrels a treat

Chief...
Wagstaff ain't worried
He's safe as can be
Here on the Internet n'
Not up a tree.

Hawks are rats
N' stealer's of hats
Pieces of ribbon
N' old ladies cats

Coot ya can't catch me
I'm safe with the Chief
Pass me the peanuts
N' give me no grief.

EVE...
well, I have a Min Pin,
who likes to eat meat
off the bones of mice,
and squirrels, and will win
any fight you give him
for he likes the challenge..

Rick...
[Note to Wagstaff]
I've never seen a hawk so depressed
he hung his head low and then he just left

Rick...
It's not about you going to jail
it's not about we're having a sale
The boat is not leaking
you don't have to bail
but do me a favor
and check your e-mail

Eve...
Well, I have a Min Pin,
who likes to eat meat
off the bones of mice,
and squirrels, and will win
any fight you give him
for he likes the challenge


Dawn...
I Aint no mincer
& I like to eat meat
Veggie's the Word
When U want to Get Heard

Andy...
I laughed when reading this long rhyme
penned by friends never costing a dime
at the weekend party committing no crime
Just them all having a jolly good time
bless them for they do no harm
kissing the blarney, turning on the charm".

Dawn...
Ink mixes with water
The dime is an art
No value required
but just doing art
The party weekend is free and so real
our friendship is marked upon the charm it "sparks"

Eve

Mr. Wagstaff has gone
he's too clever by half,
No tree does he hide
but he'll have the last laugh,
at all of us here
who will kick up a fuss,
because we are the ones,
Mr. Wagstaff distrusts,
So give him some brittle
or he will do us all harm,
to be sent to the hospital,
for a shot in the arm.

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Permalink Reply by Dawn on November 2, 2008 at 2:48am

Frederick.....
Hey I saw a Gate I chrashed Thru
then I saw Pandora nd she said boo
Oh I said where is the loo,
she said boooo
Oh im hard of hearing as well as shy sorry,

Dawn....
How are You,
I wanted to say ... "Booo too"
its good to C U here

Im no good at rhyme, but havin a go
Dont know where its leadning, but could be misleading!

Eve,,,,
Words will come, and they will grow,
Into this poem, or my heart will start bleedin'

Dawn...
I just hope this poem has "meaning",

Now, Eve is not sleeping,
Frederick is just leaping,
And,
Rick is a dreaming of ...

Rick...
Frederick,
It's good that your here
with your rhyme
to entertain the Ladies
while I fight crime
because it's easy to see,
between you and me
the Ladies rhymes
are but crimes

Dawn...
Rick
You are cheeky
and Fred is leeky
Us girls are the best
since sliced bread
We aim to please
and discourage crime
its yoo boys that
tease and give us girls
emmense unnease,

Girls dont do crime
and dont do no good
we aim to do better
and spread our pleasure
and knowing whats good for the better

Chief...
Never to fear
Wagstaff is here
Full of good cheer
M&M Peanuts - n' root beer.

Dawn and Eve
Have come to believe
They're Shelley and Keats n'
Make poetry that's hard to beat.

But squirrels ain't critics
N' really don't know
One from the other
Of them so n' so's

Just hand me some peanuts
N' a bottle of beer (root)
Cause squirrels ain't poets
And don't give a hoot.

Rick...
I have a pet hawk,
his name is coot
squirrels for breakfast
give him a hoot
so Wagstaff beware
it might not seem fair
but he's looking to eat
and considers squirrels a treat

Chief...
Wagstaff ain't worried
He's safe as can be
Here on the Internet n'
Not up a tree.

Hawks are rats
N' stealer's of hats
Pieces of ribbon
N' old ladies cats

Coot ya can't catch me
I'm safe with the Chief
Pass me the peanuts
N' give me no grief.

EVE...
well, I have a Min Pin,
who likes to eat meat
off the bones of mice,
and squirrels, and will win
any fight you give him
for he likes the challenge..

Rick...
[Note to Wagstaff]

I've never seen a hawk so depressed
he hung his head low and then he just left

Rick...
It's not about you going to jail
it's not about we're having a sale
The boat is not leaking
you don't have to bail
but do me a favor
and check your e-mail

Eve...

Well, I have a Min Pin,
who likes to eat meat
off the bones of mice,
and squirrels, and will win
any fight you give him
for he likes the challenge


Dawn...
I Aint no mincer
& I like to eat meat
Veggie's the Word
When U want to Get Heard

Andy...


I laughed when reading this long rhyme
penned by friends never costing a dime
at the weekend party committing no crime
Just them all having a jolly good time
bless them for they do no harm
kissing the blarney, turning on the charm".


Dawn...
Ink mixes with water
The dime is an art
No value required
but just doing art
The party weekend is free and so real
our friendship is marked upon the charm it "sparks"

Eve...
Mr. Wagstaff has gone
he's too clever by half,
No tree does he hide
but he'll have the last laugh,
at all of us here
who will kick up a fuss,
because we are the ones,
Mr. Wagstaff distrusts,
So give him some brittle
or he will do us all harm,
to be sent to the hospital,
for a shot in the arm.

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Permalink Reply by Angelina on November 2, 2008 at 3:09am

Thanks for inviting me
I needed a break
The worlds longest poem
Sounds just great.

I came in my paint clothes
Well, not really I must say
I wore a nice sweater
Which is now stained with cobalt turquios and a tinge of grey

So please forgive my appearance
I'll take a long island ice tea
And take a break from painting
Since the relaxing is free

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