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Permalink Reply by Arno on February 2, 2012 at 2:55am

I really like your painting.  They look like shrimp boats to me.  The sky, the water, the boats and background all look great.  I am curious about all the reddish dobs of paint on the large boat.

Arno

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Permalink Reply by w J Shelley on February 2, 2012 at 3:01am

Thanks Arno, for the comments.  The dobs are rust spots, The photo I painted from has them, however they were trouble for me.  Maybe I should have left them off?

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Permalink Reply by Arno on February 2, 2012 at 4:54am

I was going to ask if those were rust spots.  I wonder if it is the color of the rust.

Arno

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Permalink Reply by w J Shelley on February 2, 2012 at 2:30pm

I think your right... I think I should have warmed it up just a touch, maybe a little more burnt sienna or orange.  Thanks a bunch. I will paint it better next time.  I always look forward to your comments!

Arno said:

I was going to ask if those were rust spots.  I wonder if it is the color of the rust.

Arno

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Permalink Reply by Julia Powell on March 5, 2012 at 6:20pm

I like you picture very much. I agree with Arno. The colour could be a little more rusty. Nothing you can't remedy.

Julia

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Permalink Reply by kerry raymond freeman on March 8, 2012 at 11:02am

Good one ... Maybe the odd dark somewhere?

The water and composition look great...

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